omgomgomgomgomggggg!!!!!!! im such a huge fan of your work and its so cool to see you back even though my comment is two years late >.< (actually i have been listening to some of your stuff on youtube)
I'm glad you're more in tune with what you enjoy. Keep chasing your dreams~~ You've been a huge inspiration to my music (the orchestral ones :3 )
(And once you get back into music, hit me up for a collab :P )
the song is nice but a little simplistic. if the piano is the melody then it should be louder and emphasized more. the percussion is too loud.
You seem to use really similar synths in your songs and I'd like to hear some variety in synths and style. Of course it's okay for songs to have an artist's style but these are way too similar.
It's overall a bit boring. Nothing wrong with the tune but the fact that the same chords are repeated with a few different things and there isnt too much variety in chords and tunes.
Thanks for your comment :)
Interesting but it sounds really empty in the background.
It's supposed to. You need better speakers, my friend.
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wow this sounds great. The instrument in the beginning, not the very beginning, sounds great. it makes it sound so full. I really like it at 0:58 where the tune changes to become a wider range of notes. The snare sounds really dull.
Hmm so this is just a demo, right? I think the buildup to actual song ratio is kind of out of proportion. the intro is too long, but since this is a demo i guess it means you're not finished? The fast rhythm of the bassline makes the song sound kind of rushed, but when other synths come in they sound kind of slow. I think the whole song is a bit fast paced in general. At the end when other synths come in it still sounds kind of empty, especially with the absence of the bassdrum. I'm guessing something comes after that part with some hardcore beat and great full synths and it would sound awesome. If that doesnt happen, then it should :D Also, the bass seems to have a lot of high frequencies in it, which would be kind of weird for a bass.
3/5 cuz it sounds kind of good but not too great so far
It's cool. It really brings out that.. acoustic-electronic-8bittyness. 0:14-0:20 and 0:20 to 0:26, those two sections seemed kind of fast and sudden and i think if you repeated each of those it would more complete.
There's a lot of variety in this song, different instruments, different sections or whatever, and i think that if you cut it down to not be so random, it would sound better and more together rather than sounding experimental.
4/5 stars because its a good song but its not anything extra special imo.
Yeah, I'll agree the composition is a bit erratic - that's partially due to the fact I originally had some vocals planning for it but scratched them. But hey, thanks for the review!
Wow the intro really caught my attention. Like the first second of it. Some work with the mixing could be done, but great song otherwise.
Thanks for the comment!
This song is really catchy and cool :D The mixing could use a bit of work though.
Curious, what program do you use?
Thanks =) I use FL studio and the synths are nexus and sylenth1. And of course alot of more plugins
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