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Cool

It's very repetitive, as the person below said. You could add some more variation in rhythm at the beginning. The part at 0:41 is cool, with the different notes and all. I thought that was really cool ^.^ The part at 1:10 was also pretty cool. At 2:31 its a really cool part with all these awesome parts playing together. I suggest making the song shorter or get awesome earlier or else people would think this song is boring without even listening to the second half, which is amazing, especially at 3:25. >u<
The part at 4:48 is really REALLY cool. The tempo change at the end was a bit too random o.o

Overally: SO COOL at the end.

Kassich responds:

thanks for the detailed response! i def need to figure out how to get the listeners attention earlier :)

Cool

The part at the beginning is a bit too quiet. The tune at 0:24 is cool. the part at 1:35 is good. It gets quieter in 3:15 and it's really cool and awesome and then it gets louder-ish and thats cool 0u0 At the end, it took too long to get quieter and I didn't really like that, but whatever :P

Overally: really awesome song

Kassich responds:

Thanks! I have some more tracks like this one that ill put on newgrounds soon! hopefully you like them!

Awesomeness

I don't like jazz though XD Oh well, the way you put this together is really cool! :D

And the very ending was a bit random :/ I also thought the drum was a bit loud and the super fast notes part at 0:21 was a bit too quiet.

Delta1music responds:

I've made alterations and reloaded it. You should be able to hear the updated version here. I agree that the drum is kinda loud. It's also very messy, which is what I was aiming for with this song. Very messy. I even went so far as to include notes that don't match, and a lot of off-time segments. Strange that it all works together somewhat.

Cool song :)

The beginning was really awesome. At 0:48 it was really cool 0w0 I LOVED the awesome change in 0:04, but I thought that the quiet track in the background was a bit too quiet as the melody was also a bit too loud. Awesome sound at 1:36, but after that I thought the piano part was a bit random and didn't match the rest of the song. The transition at 2:07 was cool, but it was too long, and after that part the cool tune thingy came back and it sounded awesome

Overall: Beautiful song :]

Raymoclaus responds:

Thanks, the only reason that 2 of the transitions was too long was because there was also a tempo change from 180 bpm to 110 bpm in the first transition and back to 180 in the second transition. When you see it that way, it makes more sense. But thanks anyway XD

A Review

The part that comes in at 0:12 is a bit too loud, but the tune itself is awesome. The part that comes in 0:50 is cool because the 2 melodies thingys sound really good together and the part that comes in at 1:04 is really cute and i like it :] The cool part at 1:18 is a REALLY cool transition! It's like.. really cool! =] I like the mortal kombat tune thingy you remixed, but I didn't like the instrument because it was a bit too cute and i prefer a more hardcore part ;) The end part at 2:05 or something is cool. I didn't like the veryveryvery ending that much because it was a bit random o_o

Overall: really cool song! :D

AetherFlaer responds:

Awesome thanks for the breakdown. I'll take all that in mind when I work on it some more.

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